Many years ago, there was one god that was
nice and helped people with everything. There was an evil god that did not want
to help. The good, pretty god defended the people because she wanted to protect
them. The good god was a beautiful woman. The good god rode a white horse. The
evil god was also women and she was jealous. The good god had pretty hair and a
beautiful face, but the evil god had half of a face. The evil god had a black
horse that was not pretty at all. The evil god wanted to have a beautiful face
like the pretty god. The good god rode a white horse.
The evil god wanted a battle because the pretty
god had everything wonderful. She was jealous and gathered an army. The good
god also had an army. They began to battle. The humans went alongside the
pretty god because they liked her. The evil god got mad so she called for the
bad people to join her army. The evil god lost because she couldn’t fight back.
The evil god asked, “Why did I lose?”
people in the evil army were scared. The pretty god was laughing because they had failed. The evil
god wanted another battle and the pretty god said, “No. Your army is going to stop hurting my
people.” The evil god want to be friends and so did her people. The evil god said, “I’m sorry. I was
very jealous of you because I wish that I could be pretty like you. But I don’t know if you want to be
friends after what happened.” The good god decided to forgive her. The evil god became a nice god
and everyone was nice to each other. This is the world we live in now.
I like how you had the characters change through their conversation. Good work!
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