Wednesday, December 2, 2015

The War Between Gods


Many years ago, there was one god that was nice and helped people with everything. There was an evil god that did not want to help. The good, pretty god defended the people because she wanted to protect them. The good god was a beautiful woman. The good god rode a white horse. The evil god was also women and she was jealous. The good god had pretty hair and a beautiful face, but the evil god had half of a face. The evil god had a black horse that was not pretty at all. The evil god wanted to have a beautiful face like the pretty god. The good god rode a white horse.

The evil god wanted a battle because the pretty god had everything wonderful. She was jealous and gathered an army. The good god also had an army. They began to battle. The humans went alongside the pretty god because they liked her. The evil god got mad so she called for the bad people to join her army. The evil god lost because she couldn’t fight back. The evil god asked, “Why did I lose?”
           The good god said, “You lost because you did not have enough people in your army.” The

people in the evil army were scared. The pretty god was laughing because they had failed. The evil

god wanted another battle and the pretty god said, “No. Your army is going to stop hurting my

people.” The evil god want to be friends and so did her people. The evil god said, “I’m sorry. I was

 very jealous of you because I wish that I could be pretty like you. But I don’t know if you want to be

 friends after what happened.” The good god decided to forgive her. The evil god became a nice god

and everyone was nice to each other. This is the world we live in now.

1 comment:

  1. I like how you had the characters change through their conversation. Good work!

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